Base Sentence: Jillian kicked the ball.
Freighting: Jillian, Allison, and the other little ones kicked and threw the blue, misshapen ball.
Telescoping: Jillian kicked the ball, its shape deformed and color faded from overexposure to the elements.
Very Short Sentences: Jillian, Allison, and the other little ones kicked the blue, misshapen ball. It was great!
Melted-together Words: Jillian, Allison, and the other little ones kicked the seen-better-days blue ball.
Hieroglyphics: Jillian, Allison, and the other little ones kicked and threw the blue, misshapen ball; Gregory played alone.
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Good job, Jamie! Very clear & accurate examples of the techniques.
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